lines

first one

mood: confused

second one

mood: energy

third one

mood: calm

fourth one

mood: bored

revised one

mood: excited

Which one did you revise? Why? (Pick the worst one)

The one I chose to revise/thought was the worst was the last one that combined all three types of lines. I felt it was the worst because it was kind of boring and there want much going on it. The center was mostly open and plain. I didn’t like that. The revised one has a lot more going on and has more of the different kinds of lines.

Group one: Revised piece and picture two: excited and energetic

Group two: pictures three and four: calm and bored