4 Types of Line Compositions

Out of the four types of Line Compositions above, I think the last one is the weakest. This project was assigned to test our scaling and proportions skills. I think this image is weak because the proportions of the design do not create a balances composition. It also seams as though the diagonal lines are competing against each other.

The image below is my revision. My biggest challenge was making the images bold while eliminating the competing factor of the lines. I wanted to make my new image simple in the sense I feel I did just that.

Revision