You did a great job with your placement of shapes, however I think the white space is too dominant in your piece. Maybe if you had added more black to the shapes then the positive and negative space would be evenly distributed more.
I particularly like your third piece of this project. The white space immediately reminded me of a meteor and the black spots appear as the craters in the meteor; they give the piece depth. I appreciate how you had some round pieces and some irregular flowy shapes which gives the piece a natural feel. The irregular shapes and inconsistent placement truly accomplished the asymmetrical balance of the piece. The activation of both the black and white areas work together to create the image of a meteor.
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You did a great job with your placement of shapes, however I think the white space is too dominant in your piece. Maybe if you had added more black to the shapes then the positive and negative space would be evenly distributed more.
I particularly like your third piece of this project. The white space immediately reminded me of a meteor and the black spots appear as the craters in the meteor; they give the piece depth. I appreciate how you had some round pieces and some irregular flowy shapes which gives the piece a natural feel. The irregular shapes and inconsistent placement truly accomplished the asymmetrical balance of the piece. The activation of both the black and white areas work together to create the image of a meteor.
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